Narrative writing

The big bad wolf and the three little goldilocks.

In the uncharted forest lives three little girls, they live in a small cottage close by a waterfall, every frosty morning one sister will set out to fetch buckets full water from the waterfall close by, that's Jane  the oldest, Kate will cut down wood for every fires, she's the middle child and Emma she does all of the jobs in the cottage, she's the youngest. But, down the rocky path way through the trees in a dark wet cave lived an old wolf he is known as the Big Bad Wolf of the forest, he is the most meanest most scariest beast in the whole forest.

One clear frosty morning birds were singing, the sun was shining it was all perfect until…AAA all of their products vanished, they need them to do their chores, every single fragrant spray were gone for cleaning, the axe, the buckets it was a nightmare, they all paused but, after a while they heard a gentle giggle at the back of the cottage so they crept to the laughing sound it got louder and louder than their he was the Big Bad Wolf with all of their stuff so as quick as a flash he leapt over the three sisters and scurried off to his old damp cave to celebrate his victory.

‘Ha’! “I knew it! Barked Jane”.

All three of them sat down in shock, thinking. How to get back at that beastly looking freak (light bulb) Emma stood up looking all bright and all but as soon as she could talk the other two started arguing, nearly the whole forest could hear what's going on…”STOP Yelled Emma” we need to keep calm. She had this mad idea so they all bunched up together and started to whisper.

The next day the Big Bad Wolf was wondering through the woods, thinking how good he is at destroying people’s lives, but their in the woods was this beautiful wafting smell, traveling up his nostrils, fresh baked cookies ready for cooling, he followed the smelling track and it lead him to the three little goldilocks cottage, he was thinking to himself “if I can steal from them I can do it again” so he crept to the cottage trying not to blow his cover and with a big bang he bugged down the front door… ha just the creature I want to see, we were looking over for you and there were the cookies laying down on the bench, the three sisters started to welcome him in and so on they went talking and talking, ( the time has come) whispered Emma the Big Bad Wolf picked up a cookie and gobbled it up nearly the whole tray.

The Big Bad Wolf asked politely ‘what are in these cookies exactly’ Ha Poison! they all shouted and with a big bang he fall to the ground not moving a muscle he was now dead, the three sisters raced to his cave and got their stuff back, yay well that's the end of that beasty thing.